So, I was watching some Mystery Science Theater 3000 episodes today and realized something.
I think my first submission of Time makes about as much sense as the movie Space Mutiny; if you don't get this reference, just ask Katherine.
Thanks for all your comments on the first chapter. I think I forgot how hard it is to take criticism about my work. I used to be better at it. Also, I'm used to receiving it in an academic work shop setting and it's kind of a different experience. I decided to start over by getting a feel for the voice of my main character. I feel like she should be older, and per Brant's suggestion, not a massive dose of annoying clumsiness. It might be a while before I re-submit the chapter, I'm trying to be patient with myself. I've gotten farther by writing from the character instead of dictating the story line myself. Thanks again.
Saturday, July 11, 2009
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I hope we have been of help. Criticism is always hard to hear, and harder to listen to. Addressing critics is something every writer struggles with, and is a skill that must be mastered to succeed as a professional. With time and effort the problems you have now can be overcome and you can learn to tell your story in a way you like. And that is the real key to success: to tell your story in a way you like. Achieve that and you can feel justifiable pride in your work.
ReplyDeleteI told you, MST3K is a dose of real life in a convenient 90 min package. And as for learning to take criticism, I do believe that after my first criticism, I cried. That is why, at least for the first set of critiques, I ask for general or paragraph by paragraph. It is easier to take in large chunks, and youm have the edits on file to digest later.
ReplyDeleteI do think you have the makings of quite an interesting story, and I hope you don't lose the sarcasm that lies underneath. Happy writing.