My post this week is a bit delayed due to laziness combined with the game Castle Age on Facebook. (Curse you Nicole for introducing me to a game I enjoy! Wait…that doesn’t sound right…. Never mind. We return you to your regularly scheduled post.)
In addition to being lazy and goofing off, I have been reading various blogs lately, some of which I found to be highly informative. I thought it would be good idea to pass on a few quick links for those interested in the art of writing.
First Up: Between Fact And Fiction
Natalie Whipple wrote a post entitled Revision Reference on her blog, Between Fact and Fiction. In addition to being very interesting, this post made me feel like the slowest writer in creation. She casually mentions that last year she wrote first drafts for 6.5 books! and that this is to be "The Year of Revision".
After I popped my eyes back into my head, I went on to read what she described as “The little ticks that bog down” her writing. I saw in her list many attributes I have learned to avoid thanks to the Magic City Writers’ Group.
Such tidbits include Hedging (“she almost ran to the door” versus “she ran to the door”) and using Tags such as angrily, sadly, vehemently, and so forth instead of describing actions that imply the emotion.
Natalie goes on with a list that includes Chattiness, Repetitiveness, Overstaging, and other items good writers shouldn’t do. It is a very well-written, highly informative post that I can easily recommend to anyone wanting to improve their writing skills.
Second Up: There Are No Rules
The book is The Writing & Critique Group Survival Guide: How to Make Revisions, Self-Edit, and Give and Receive Feedback. Given that this blog is dedicated to a writers’ group, I think you can see why this caught my attention.
I’ll let Jane’s post explain why this is a good book to have. For myself, I plan to sucker someone into buying it, and then borrow it from them. (Nicole, you owe me for Castle Age!)
Third Up :There Are No Rules, Again
Yes two posts from the same blog. It’s a good blog. This time I am highlighting a guest post by Jim Adam entitled Story Structure: Beginnings, Middles, and Ends.
This post focuses on the Harry Potter series as a way to highlight good story structure. It is a first rate analysis and part of a larger series of guest posts he is doing using the Harry Potter series to discuss various elements of storytelling.
In this installment, he points out how both the individual books and the series as a whole have layers of structure designed to draw the reader in and give them a sense that the story is “going somewhere”. He also underscores how J.K. Rowling includes details, scenes, and incidents that at first seem minor, but become important to the plot.
This is a post that makes you think of stories at a higher level. That requires you to step back and think about how the small details give rise to a pattern that readers subliminally understand and respond to. For new writers, such as myself, Jim’s post is thought-provoking and provides insights easily overlooked when casually reading the Harry Potter books.
Th…Th…Th…That’s All Folks!
There were other great posts I read this week, but I am behind on my list of 3-trillion things to do, so I shall sign off till next time. Have fun and party down.